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Rain Man by ~CriticizeUsAll:iconCriticizeUsAll:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Fashion Portraits

©2006-2009 ~CriticizeUsAll
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~pamukkale Aug 10, 2006, 11:17:22 PM
A fine composition here.. Well done.
As for the mistakes i want to share, hmm the model seems out of focus to me. You have to sharped him up in my opinion. And as for the colors.. It's too yellow because of the street lamp i guess. Some cooling filter would work here.. The shack at the bacground disturbes me a little.. it could be better if wasn't there or burned with ps.. Road and model seems great but that shack spoils the photo i think..
Whatever it's a successful work imho. Many regards..

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~toreoztok Aug 11, 2006, 12:11:16 AM
Well, well, well.. Really good there! I guess you have a balance problem here.. To be honest neither do I:D If I were you, I'll really do like you do. The subject isn't at the right place but the poles?? Very well done composition.
There is an attractive reflection there my friend, but you've missed it! Aaaarrghh :fork:
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~toreoztok Aug 11, 2006, 12:13:29 AM
Huh, by the way;
I'm not sure about the huge, white, distracting frame. It draws my attention out!
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~Xecutioner379 Aug 11, 2006, 9:46:53 AM
It's overall a very yellow-ish picture, I'd try and color balance it out in photoshop if you have it :)

Also perhaps refocus to make the person a tad sharper, :)

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~spoco2 Aug 13, 2006, 3:16:55 PM
I really like this one... the aspect ratio works well for it, with him looking along the line of it. I can't think of much wrong with this at all really. A truly amazing shot could be gained from a lot more work, and setting up people in the buildings on the other side of the road doing odd things.

But just great shot.
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~ullic Sep 10, 2006, 9:14:35 AM
thx, well a tripod wold do good too, but alas, this is 4 in the morning:)

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